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Title: Calendar Girl
Summary:  Chloe leaves for Star City to start fresh after inadvertently seeing Clark and Lana consummate their relationship. But she soon finds herself hesitating to let another guy into her life when she accidentally runs into Oliver Queen during her first day at Star City University.
Rating
: PG-13

Disclaimer: I own nothing, except for a couple of original characters, any resemblance to another character is coincidental.

Author Note: Sorry for the delay, but this chapter was not cooperating with me. I've re-written it at least twice and I know my Lois is probably OOC at the end, but I have a feeling that it's only going to get worse if I keep messing with it. So I'm posting it now and hoping I'm just paranoid.

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March

All of the things that I thought were so easy
Just got harder and harder each day

March 7

After a long spring break, Chloe was happy to be back on campus and even grateful to be working at Lazee's again. The time off had been enjoyable for the most part, but Lois used it as an excuse to quiz her and Evie about the usual... not to mention that neither of their Valentine's Days really helped their case.

Initially, Evie wasn't afraid to give minor details, purposely leaving out the whole hotel room thing and insisting that she stayed with a 'friend' that night, and even though Evie knew Lois would never buy that, it was her own fault that she didn't. Evie was the one who told Lois that Chloe had stayed at Oliver's that night, and neither woman was willing to buy the gas leak story until she dragged Hailey down to Lazee's to confirm it. That was two weeks ago… and Lois refused to let it go, yelling about how she leaves for three days and the equivalent of hell freezing over happens.

However, there was no avoiding her cousin when spring break rolled around, especially considering their lack of homework and the announcement that the owners decided to close Lazee's for the week.  Furthermore, both women were pretty close to being broke, so their travel options were limited, especially with Oliver out of town for business. so Lois insisted on a girl's week staycation (a word that Chloe honestly never understood), and dragged Evie and Chloe around Star City. That's not to say that they didn't have fun, but after awhile, they wanted to talk about more than just their love lives, or in Chloe's case, lack thereof.

So hearing the smooth jazz music currently playing in the background at the café was a nice break from her ranting, and it allowed Chloe to get lost in something as menial as cleaning a table until she heard a familiar voice.

"Chloe… I need a favour."

"Define favour," she said, still half in a trance.

"A plus one for Friday night?"

She dropped her cloth to glare at Oliver. "No."

"Chloe, please. Just this one time."

After deepening her glare, Chloe gathered the coffee cups and began to head towards the counter. "One time, huh?  So what do you call Halloween and that benefit a couple months ago?"

Once she had passed the cups to Katie, she could tell the wheels in his head were turning, as he opened his mouth a couple of times, but eventually, his expression softened and he said in a pleading tone, "Just one more time?"

"And you say you don't pout," she said snickering as she snuck behind the counter.

"Was that a yes?"

With her back to him, Chloe sighed. "That was a 'Fine, I'll save you from the insufferable company that you keep.'"

Chloe had said that with every intention of having the final word, but Oliver managed to say, "Great... your dress will at your dorm on Thursday," before the door to the back completely closed.

"What?" Chloe said, quickly walking back into the shop. She saw Oliver heading the for the door, so she said in desperation, "Ollie, we've been through this."

Turning back a final time as he opened the door, he stated with confidence, "And I always win," before flashing his signature grin and walked out.

Shaking her head, Chloe began walking over to another table that had to be cleaned. "You're lucky I trust your judgment," she muttered under her breath.


March 11

Evie looked at Chloe from the corner of her eye as she was getting ready for the charity gala. She knew that spring and formal events weren't exactly words that combined well for Chloe, so it surprised Evie when she found out she was accompanying Oliver again. "I thought you were done the whole benefit thing, especially considering the time of year."

Chloe sighed as she slipped the dress over her head. "If I'm not going to get over that now, I'm never going to. It's time to but the past behind me."  Looking over her shoulder, Chloe gave a quick smile to her roommate. "Can you zip me up?"

Evie obliged and then stepped back to have a look at Chloe from a distance. "That's quite the dress."

"I'll have to trust you on that one," Chloe said while looking down on at the black dress Oliver had bought for her. It seemed to fit her perfectly, as it hugged her curves, but it pooled on the floor a bit, which meant Chloe would also need the supplied heels.

"Believe me... you look gorgeous. Oliver's gonna lose it."

Chloe rolled her eyes as she perfected her hair. "Come on Evie, not you too."

"He's a guy, Chloe, and coincidentally a fool if he doesn't acknowledge how great you look." As Evie attempted to sit back down, there was a knock on the door, so she stood back up and told Chloe, "Stay there, I'll get it." She walked over to the door and smiled at Oliver. "Evening, Oliver."

"Always nice to see you, Evie."

"For the record, you outdid yourself on the dress." She opened the door further to show Chloe, who in the meantime had finished slipping on the gold heels. Seeing him, she stood up straight and gave him a smile.

"Hey you."

Oliver's mouth widened as he entered the room. "Wow, you look amazing."

Evie took this moment to sneak out into the room, snickering lightly as she walked down the hallway. She knew better than to assume anything, but she always found it humorous that they had practically googly-eyed each other and allowed Evie to slip out without them having a clue. Chloe wasn't the only one with plans tonight.

~0~

The night hadn't been a complete disaster as Chloe would have thought. Most of their time had been spent leaning against the wall while Oliver pointed out people he couldn't stand. They had almost been caught once as one person turned in their direction as Oliver was pointing at them, but he covered it with an invitation to dance. Chloe took it, because she liked how she felt when she danced with him... like a feather floating on air. Even though she was just one level above two left feet, he made her look good on the dance floor. Spinning her around, dipping her up and down, he definitely knew what he was doing.

After a couple of songs, they had found the way back to their spot and were back to sipping champagne and pointing. It felt normal, natural, until Chloe eyed a woman sizing up Oliver from across the room.

In a room full of stuffy elder gentlemen, the redhead stood out as she started approaching them. Oliver was oblivious to her as he continued the conversation, but it was hard to ignore her when she got close.

"Oliver Queen... it's been too long."

He turned to look at her and grinned. "How have you been?"

"Splendid... and who may I ask, is accompanying you tonight?"

Oliver put his arm around Chloe. "This is Chloe."  Turning to look at her, Oliver completed the introduction, "Chloe, this is Amber... her father is an old friend of my parents."

"So this is Chloe. I've been dying to meet the person responsible for making an honest man out of Oliver."

After barely swallowing her champagne, Chloe managed, "Excuse me?"

"Aren't you two..." Amber said, pointing between the two.

"Just friends," Chloe quickly said, feeling Oliver's arm leave her shoulder.

"He'd been off the club circuit for a while… I just assumed."

Seeing that Chloe was still struggling with speaking, Oliver spoke up. "I've been spending the last couple of months getting my priorities straight."

"Always good to hear... you don't suppose I could steal you for a moment? We have so much to catch up on." She looked over at Chloe and added, "That is of course, if you don't mind."

"Why would I mind?"

"I'll be right there." Oliver turned to Chloe, "Are you alright?"

"Fine," she said before she watched him walk in Amber's direction, leaving Chloe alone for the first time all night.

She watched Oliver dancing with her, and how her head titled back in laughter as they moved along the floor. At this point, Chloe wasn't sure if they were bonding or if Amber was just trying to make her jealous. Not that it was working, of course, because Oliver looked to be wearing quite the poker face, which caused Chloe to chuckle.

Then something happened that she didn't expect when she closed her eyes and saw a flash of Clark and Lana smiling at each other. Opening them again, Chloe felt a pit in her chest as she made a camera out of her fingers and looked at them dancing. Oliver may not be genuinely interested in Amber, but on paper, they looked right. Looking down at her feet, she remembered walking through the carnival in January, convinced that they were just friends. But as days went by, and conversations with Lois and Evie trickled into 'he's into you' territory, Chloe began to question everything. Was she just kidding herself in thinking they could just be friends? But more importantly, had she just prolonged the inevitable only to find out their worlds weren't meant to collide? Needing to get out of the room, Chloe quickly headed out the door and walked towards the elevators.

However, she froze when it came to punching the button, so she backed up to lean against the wall across from the elevators and closed her eyes. It wasn't going to get any easier from here, Chloe knew that.

With Oliver, there was no competition; no Lana standing in her way... not even the redhead he was currently with. As far as Chloe knew, Oliver had stayed out of the limelight and the only women she had seen him with other than her had been Lois and Evie. Yet, Chloe wasn't sure if she was willing to take that chance because she treasured his friendship more than she ever thought she could.

If he said no, it would likely be immediately awkward, and they would lose the friendship that they worked hard to build.   However, saying yes didn't make anything easier because there would always be an expiration date. Chloe was going back to Metropolis in three years, she knew that Oliver wouldn't want her to sacrifice her dream for anything, and long distance relationships never worked, not to mention the constant workload that would essentially handicap any form of communication.

At the end of the day, someone like Amber would eventually step in, someone who lived the life he did, someone who understood his struggles and... other stuff like that. It hurt Chloe to think like that, but seeing Oliver on his own at formal events had made her realize that this was his life and she was just visiting.

Hearing the echo of footsteps coming towards her, Chloe slowly opened her eyes to see Oliver round the corner.

Before he had a chance to say anything, Chloe's mouth twitched into a grin. "Just needed some air."

He settled straight in front of her as he gazed towards the door. "It does get pretty stuffy in there."

"Sorry, I guess I'm still not used to these things."

Oliver nodded. "I know, your body language clearly dictates that. Let's get out of here."

Caught off-guard by his question, Chloe raised an eyebrow. "What?"

"We could get some food...I know you haven't eaten anything all night."

"Well, the high-class hors d'oeuvres have never been high on my favourite food list."

"I think I know just the place."

"Oliver, you don't have to leave because…"

He watched her head dip, so he placed a finger under her chin and lifted back up.  "I'm not letting you take a cab home."

"What about Amber?" Chloe asked with a chuckle.

"She always thought that her and I were meant to be because of our parent's relationship, but we want different things. Amber thrives in that spotlight, and thanks to you, I appreciate living my life on my own terms instead of a full-page spread on a magazine." Stepping in front of her to hit the elevator button, he added, "Besides, if I wanted to spend time with her, I wouldn't have made you come."

"Oh…okay," Chloe managed; she hadn't been expecting that answer.

The elevator door opened and she watched Oliver enter first. "Do you trust me?"

A smile cracked across Chloe's face as she stepped in the elevator. "Lead the way."

~0~

It almost felt wrong what she were doing right now, unwrapping a greasy hamburger in a million dollar car while they were dressed up, but Chloe couldn't stop smiling.  She hadn't eaten since breakfast, and there was no way she was eating caviar or petite foie gras, whatever that was.  Looking at Oliver pull into a vacant parking lot, he pulled the keys out of the ignition and grabbed his burger.  However, before he unwrapped it, he looked over at Chloe.

"How are you feeling now?"

"Much better, thanks." Squeezing her burger, Chloe attempted to bite it when she noticed a drop of ketchup had landed on her dress, so she frantically handed her burger to Oliver, afraid that she might wreck the interior of his care if she set it down.

"Chloe... it's fine."

She spat on her napkin and tried to rub the stain out, but it was no use. Staring at the napkin, she sighed as she realized what she had just done. "No, it's not. This dress is... was likely more valuable than my entire wardrobe."

"I can always get you another one if you like it that much."

Finally finding it in herself to relax, she sat up and leaned her head against the headrest as she looked out into the night. "I don't know what's wrong with me today. I'm such a mess."

"It's my fault, I shouldn't have pushed you to come. It's just that..."

"What?"

"You have so much faith in me. I feel like I'm capable of anything when you're around."

Chloe turned her head to the side and smiled at him.  "Maybe because you are. I mean, I don't think I can think of anyone else who would take me to a burger joint while you're dressed to the nines."

"I'd been trying to find the right time to tell you about this place; I figured worst case scenario, I could take you for a birthday burger."

Snatching her burger back, Chloe finally took a big bite and moaned the moment it touched her tongue. "You still can, this is delicious."

"Actually, I've been meaning to ask what you're doing for your birthday."

Chloe wasn't a big fan of birthdays, especially her own. It was usually spent alone because her dad had to work, or dealing with the many issues that Smallville had from girlfriends to the weekly meteor freak. For once, Chloe wanted to forget all about her birthday, but it looked like an impossibility now that Oliver was offering to do something.

"I honestly hadn't thought about it. Low-key dinner maybe?"

"I was wondering if you'd let me book Lazee's for the night and have a coffee sampling sort of deal. You could invite the people from the Journal and have free coffee for a night."

It was definitely more than Chloe wanted, but it was low-scale enough that she figured she could handle it. "I can't say no to coffee."

"So it's settled."

"I guess so," she said quietly.

For the next hour, they sat in the parking lot and exchanged stories about spring break as they ate their burgers.  Once they were finished, Oliver started up the car again and drove Chloe back to her dorm.

"Hey, thanks again for doing this."

Chloe undid her seatbelt and exited the car.  "It wasn't that bad honestly. I'll get used to them yet."

"Keep that in mind next time I ask" Oliver said, pressing his foot on the gas before Chloe had a chance to say anything of the contrary.

"I did walk into that one I guess," Chloe said to herself. Looking down the road, she let out a quick smile before heading into the building.



March 25

Chloe hung up her phone and sighed… she knew he was busy with important matters but hearing him say that he couldn't make her birthday party still hurt. He had taken the time to book Lazee's for the evening, bring the Journal crew and Lois together, but the cafe felt a lot emptier now that she knew Oliver wasn't there.

"He's not coming, is he?"

Chloe shook her head. "An international deal isn't going as smoothly as he thought. He doesn't want it to fall through."

Lois sighed as she sat down next to her cousin. It was supposed to be Chloe's night, but she chose to isolate herself and everyone knew why.  In fact, Lois was half convinced that even Chloe knew why. "Look cuz, I know I haven't been the subtlest with you two, but you have to see it, don't you?"

"See what?"

"You... Oliver... do I need to say more?"

"Lois, a guy and a girl can be friends without feelings or hormones getting in the way," Chloe said rolling her eyes.

"Yes they can... I'm not disputing that."

"So stop looking for there to be something more when there isn't."

"Then explain to me why he'd want you by his side for the high-class events because he doesn't want to go with anyone else... why he looks after you the way he does... and why he continued his playboy persona just to make your life easier?"

Averting her gaze from her cousin, Chloe stated, "Friends do those things too, you know."

"Okay... then how about you. For years I told you to stand up to Clark and you never listened, but within a couple months of meeting Oliver, you finally did it... and now you're standing up for yourself more than I've ever seen."

"So?"

Lois sighed again. "Think about it Chloe."

"It's not like that."

"If it wasn't like that, you'd be fighting me on it, not brushing me off while you're staring at the door, hoping he walks in and surprises you."

Chloe immediately turned her head back towards her cousin, knowing that she had been caught.  Swirling what was left of her coffee, she asked, "Is it wrong that I want to see him on my birthday?"

"Do me a favour cuz... look at them." Lois pointed over in Evie and Scott's direction as they were sitting across the room at a table. He had whispered something in her ear, causing Evie to laugh. "They're happy... and they started as friends... and fittingly people who refused to acknowledge what was in front of them until they were given a slight push by the people who cared about them the most. Don't you think you deserve the same kind of happiness?"

"Yes... but I can't live the life he does. You fit the part better than I do."

Lois almost fell out of her chair upon hearing that comment. "I'm sorry... what?"

"He'll find someone like you who can fit what he needs. I'm just a temporary fixture."

Lois shook her head and said softly, "Chloe, if anyone's replaceable... it's someone like me."

"You're kidding me, right?"

"I'm a gossip columnist, cuz... no one takes me seriously. When a guy looks at me, all he sees is a hot pair of legs and large assets. Someday... I'll find someone who sees me and I'll know exactly what to look for because he'll look at me the same way Oliver looks at you."

Chloe looked for a hint of insincerity in Lois' words, but her cousin didn't break, so Chloe covered her shock with a scoff. "That's crazy."

"Okay... enough with subtlety, I tried. How do you feel about Oliver? Honestly."

Chloe looked at her cousin and opened her mouth to answer the question, but she couldn't. How did she feel about Oliver?  Sipping her coffee for liquid courage, Chloe said, "Friends," while still staring at her cup.

"Nice try... how about you try looking me in the eye and tell me that you don't love him?"

"Lois!"

"I'm not going to stop goading you until you say it and if you don't say anything... I'll announce it to the entire room."

She repeated, "Lois!" as she banged her hand against the table, causing everyone to turn and look in her direction. Chloe turned her head and said "Sorry," sheepishly before turning back to Lois. "I'm not," she whispered.

"You're not...?"

"Oliver and I... we're not..."

"Either you're finishing that sentence, or I am."

"I doubt Ollie's in love with me, so whatever I'm feeling doesn't matter."

Chloe could sense the slight happiness in her cousin's eyes before she said, "Not what I was expecting, but hey, we're making progress."

"Progress? You're not my shrink, Lois."

Lois sat back in her chair and crossed her arms.  "Well, until you decide to talk with someone... I'll have to be yours unofficially."

"No," Chloe said getting up in her chair, "not if I don't want to talk." She walked out of the coffee shop and began walking towards her dorm when she heard footsteps behind her. "Lois, can we drop this?"

"Not Lois," Evie said from behind her.

"I just need some time alone."

"Fine, but you should at least say goodbye... it is your party."

"Right," Chloe said, giving her friend a half-smile that she knew Evie would see right through. Walking back into the cafe, Chloe thanked everyone for coming and bade everyone farewell and told Lois they would talk later... much much later.  After everyone had left and convincing Evie that she would close up, Chloe stood alone at the entranceway staring at her chair.

Everything her cousin had said was ringing in her head, because everything she had told Chloe had merit. Oliver had done a lot of little things to make her feel special, but Chloe just assumed that was normal because no guy had actually been in love with her. Sure, her exposure to guys was limited, but she was the platonic figure... wasn't she?

Sighing, she turned off the lights and locked the door. It was time to get some sleep, provided she could sleep with so much going on in her head.

Little did Chloe know that across the quad was Oliver, rushing to meet her after Evie had called him to convince him to put his plans on hold for a couple of hours. Seeing her shaken up and walking to her dorm alone caused him to stop and reconsider approaching her now. He had let her down, and showing up now probably wasn't going to help things. Taking a final look at her body language, Oliver shoved the box back into his pocket and walked back to his car.





April


on March 18th, 2011 05:38 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] jen-am.livejournal.com
So, I squealed when I saw there was an update from you for this story!! I love this story, I hope the next part will be up soon!

on March 18th, 2011 06:10 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
Awww... thank you, that means a lot. Other than May, the other chapters are mostly ready, so it should be smoother from here.

on March 18th, 2011 05:48 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sarahol1.livejournal.com
Well that was a very evil little cliffhanger! And I didn't really find your Lois that OOC...even complete ball busters can be a little intrspective and insightful from time to time! :)

on March 18th, 2011 06:13 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
I'm glad Lois didn't seem OOC to you because I needed Chloe to have that talk with her.

As for the cliffhanger... the good news is April is almost done, bad news is ....you're likely going to hate May.

on March 18th, 2011 07:09 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] poetgirl925.livejournal.com
I started reading this at FF.net and I've commented there before, but I'll say it again - I really have enjoyed this story. I've read all of your stories posted at FF, actually, and they're all great. You've captured their characters so well in this AU. This chapter is particularly emotional for Chloe - she's realizing how she feels about Oliver, but she's afraid to let herself travel that road again. And just when she was considering it, Oliver let her down - unintentionally, and with cause, but he let her down all the same. Looking forward to April to see how he fixes that :)

on March 18th, 2011 10:02 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
I've been to PM you because I appreciate all of your kinds word on FF, and I'm really happy that you're enjoying this story so much. There's still a couple bumps down the road, but they are getting there. Thanks for reading and commenting!

on March 18th, 2011 07:52 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] mystic-ri96.livejournal.com
ollie! aww i was really expecting him to go up to her): update soon plz! (:

on March 18th, 2011 10:03 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
I thought about it, but it worked better for the storyline this way... but I'll try to update soon.

on March 18th, 2011 08:08 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] abarbiestory.livejournal.com
oliver your killing me!!!!! the girl finally afte months admits some things and he goes back in the car!!!!! i have a headache!!! lol

great job

on March 18th, 2011 10:05 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
Yeah, but he doesn't know that, and I'm still debating how much (if any) Lois tells him.

Thanks for reading!

on March 18th, 2011 08:52 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] nienna87.livejournal.com
Well at least she has feelings for him. I just feel so bad for her cuz she has such a low view of herself. Oliver is good for her! And he loves her too!

What is he doing?! Go to her you idiot! Ugh they both are killing me here. Love this story! Keep up the good work!

on March 18th, 2011 10:08 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
Reasons why not you shouldn't are sometimes easier to accept than reason why you should, but things start to change soon.

on March 18th, 2011 11:43 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] amazing-07.livejournal.com
So amazing!!!!

on March 19th, 2011 12:45 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
Thanks!

on March 18th, 2011 11:46 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] prophet64.livejournal.com
I loved this chapter....

Ergh... what was Oliver doing.... Be a man and go to her lol.

I really enjoyed the Chlo-lo chat and Chloe finally admitting that their is something more between her and Oliver.

I'm looking forward to reading the next part. Great job :)

on March 19th, 2011 12:49 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
Thank you.

(If he went to her, it would throw off my entire storyline)

Lois had been weirdly absent for a while, so I knew that it was about time for some Chlo-Lo, so I'm glad you liked it.

on March 18th, 2011 11:48 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] paulingui.livejournal.com
I really like this chapter.It was nice to see how Chloe is starting to open her eyes :)..yaaaay finally!.

Oliver it's so patient with her, love that he is not pushing her that much.

on March 19th, 2011 12:51 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
Key word here is starting. As for Oliver, I think you're the only one that liked that part.

on March 19th, 2011 12:09 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] saurina.livejournal.com
I know that Lois normaly is a very bombastic person, but with people close to her, she often shows a more gentle contemplative side. Okay while still being pushy ha ha.. Anywhoo what I'm getting at, is that I don't think that she was OOC in the last part. Very nicely done in fact and I love that Chloe is finally getting a clue. Can't wait for april..:)))

on March 19th, 2011 12:55 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
I love writing Lois, but her bombastic-ness has kind of calmed down for the last little and I was afraid I was losing her. One of these days, I'll stop doubting my characterization, but until then, it's good to know that you found that okay.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

on March 19th, 2011 01:05 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kachica.livejournal.com
Great update! I'm enjoying this story, Sera! Hopefully you will update soon. I still need to read your other one.

on March 19th, 2011 01:20 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
Thanks Keiko... I'll try to update soon.
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on March 19th, 2011 03:42 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
Thanks Steph! Like Lois said... progress, but there's still a lot of work to be done.

on March 20th, 2011 05:18 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] greenteam4ever.livejournal.com
I like your story SO much!Can't wait for a new chapter.
As for Oliver, I think he did the right decision, Chloe nedeed to think everything through, but I hope she'll understand him. Hey, he had a really serious business, he's CEO after all!But surely he have to do something. Maybe with a tiny-little help of Lois..?
I was thrilled to know that April is on its way, but what is it about May?I'm so afraid it'll be even more tradgic then the end of this chapter!I just hope I won't see anyone's heart broken, I want them to be happy :)

on March 20th, 2011 05:35 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
Chloe understands, there's just a lot going on her mind right now. The only thing I'm debating about for April is Lois' involvement... but things start changing next chapter.

As for May, I'm afraid I can't give any more information, in fact, I think I've given away too much, but I want to prepare people.

on March 20th, 2011 06:25 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] greenteam4ever.livejournal.com
Yeah, I understand.
I'm glad that things are changing. Waiting for an update!

on March 26th, 2011 09:07 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sjww.livejournal.com
I love this story!!! gutted I haven't been able to catch up on the last couple of chapters till now

I liked the way you wrote Lois in this chapter...yeah she is a force to be reckoned with - but I think she does have a side where she is intuitive enough to know when to take a softly softly approach and I like that she did in this chapter...

sad to see Ollie didn't make to the coffee shop but it gave Chloe an a chance to realise her feelings...great chapter off to read April now :-)

on March 26th, 2011 01:55 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
It's a busy time of year, but I always appreciate your comments, so thanks!

The more I read the Chlo-Lo, the less I worry about it, and the fact everyone seems to be okay with it helps too.

on April 5th, 2011 05:13 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] slytherinpunk.livejournal.com
First, I loved that Oliver roped Chloe into another benefit, and that he told her without her needing to ask that there was nothing between him and Amber, and that they wanted different things. Chloe's dress sounded beautiful and I love how it left Ollie slightly speechless.

I didn't know Chloe's birthday was in March, upon doing research for a story I was informed it was December, but just as well... I loved Ollie's idea for throwing her a birthday party--I'm tempted to try that...

And I felt so bad for Chloe that Oliver couldn't make it and then for him to rush to get there to try and give her his gift, only to miss her... Broke my heart =( Seems like every time something goes right for Chlollie... It takes two steps back.

Loved the chapter!

on April 5th, 2011 08:22 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
The benefit was something I had to do. It was another nail in the Clark drama coffin, it allowed to Chloe to move on (sort of), and I'll admit, Evie's whole "you guys just googly-eyed each other" as she slipped out, was fun to write.

Smallville's known for its lack in continuity so it wouldn't surprise me if her birthday is in December... I just based it on "Hex" which was aired in late March. It's for that reason that I'm scared to define any other character's birthday (except I think I have Lois' in August). And hey, feel free to try the idea... although unlike me, you might want to have him there.

That little scene was a last minute thing, but for it to have so much power makes me glad I added it.

on April 6th, 2011 12:19 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] slytherinpunk.livejournal.com
Lol, my bad, I meant I'd have to try renting out a coffeehouse for my birthday... But hmm... Ollie/Justin should still be there ;) Well if I had my way anyways.

Your last minute scene was a great call! Good instinct!

on April 6th, 2011 12:43 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
*chuckle* It's all good. I'm actually trying to avoid coffee (one less vice to rely on through life), so that wouldn't be my cup of tea (pun unintended... I don't even like tea), but hey... you should still do that if you can.

And if you can get Ollie/Justin to come... bonus ;)

Thanks!

on November 1st, 2011 06:50 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] carberryhyn.livejournal.com
excellent articles, useful for me. keep writing and happy blogging.

on November 1st, 2011 10:49 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] serafina19.livejournal.com
Thanks so much for the comment! I hope you enjoy the rest. To be honest, I'm not sure when I'll start posting the third part, but hopefully soon.

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